am a52bc2f0: Merge "Revises several lines of comments based on Googler...
am a52bc2f0: Merge "Revises several lines of comments based on Googler feedback (~8 in total)." into lmp-mr1-ub-docs
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Revises several lines of comments based on Googler feedback (~8 in total).